were you going for the exaggeration of the torso? if you were then it looks fine. the anatomy of the raised leg is a little off to me. the muscle seems not to be in the right place on the upper part of the leg. additionally, i am curious why you didn't choose to do her wg?
heh yeah I am trying to find a style I like for exaggerating the form of someone who is really thin but also really voluptuous, I really like how one piece does it's women. I am doing some pieces to try and sell at otakon, so I won't be doing any WG since I doubt i'd sell that well. unforunately.